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Re: Tier system
by Butterfly Wed Oct 23, 2013 9:31 pm
WOAH JESUS SPLIT THAT THANG UP INTO PARAGRAPHS NO ONE WANTS TO READ A BIG BLOCK OF TEXT
just saying
just saying
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Re: Tier system
by Celeste Valacari Thu Oct 24, 2013 2:13 pm
Calm down there, Butters.
But she's right. The topic should be broken up into different paragraphs, so that the text is more easily read.
Other things I think would be beneficial to the post:
1. If you can take out any mention of prohibited pokemon, like Kyruem, Regirock, Articuno, etc.
2. Blaziken's ability only applies in one of the generations; in generations 1-5, it's usually Blaze (Powers up fire-type moves in a pinch).
3. A grammar check would be nice. That way, it seems more professional and the mistakes don't take away from the context. If this task is too daunting, I'd be more then willing to do a little spell-grammar check for you.
If you have any questions, don't hesitate to send me a pm!
~Celeste
But she's right. The topic should be broken up into different paragraphs, so that the text is more easily read.
Other things I think would be beneficial to the post:
1. If you can take out any mention of prohibited pokemon, like Kyruem, Regirock, Articuno, etc.
2. Blaziken's ability only applies in one of the generations; in generations 1-5, it's usually Blaze (Powers up fire-type moves in a pinch).
3. A grammar check would be nice. That way, it seems more professional and the mistakes don't take away from the context. If this task is too daunting, I'd be more then willing to do a little spell-grammar check for you.
If you have any questions, don't hesitate to send me a pm!
~Celeste
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Join date : 2013-09-22
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